Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Alex - part7



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  1. Hi Steff,
    Another great addition. You must truly have a feel for your characters. Again I waited until I relaxed last evening to savor your wares to find a really beautiful segue. I did add a little comment to your response at part six. Alex's mind may be in turmoil, but Lexi is falling into the feminine mystique with both heels.
    You are a talent! More please. hugs Lee

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    1. Hi honey!
      I've just replied to your comment on part six; but let me say also here how I'm glad to know that this first serial is just succeeding in agreement to to your enjoyment and taste! And I'm happy as well to see that you've actually understood the two-dimensional nature of the Alex/lexy's character. By the way, if Alex is just thinking to himself as a boy, maybe a weak, effeminate, with girly mannerism, girly slang....but though still a boy! On the other hand we've the Lexy "side" that more and more often take over... and this process just make Alex truly confused about himself and his feelings. The only remnant of real perception of him was Alice, but after her leave... the Lexy-side is free; and for Alex, it's time to deal with it! But anyway, after this first set I want to take a break from Alex, basically to focus myself on new and, as I hope, interesting stories with other characters and stuff.

      Kisses,
      Steffy

      ps. If you haven't already done, take a look at the final section of this story, I've posted it just right now. Hope you like this first experiment in captioning!

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