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The "little" Hilton's house |
Auntie's Help
Ch1 - Family Matters
For the Hiltons, last years haven't been so easy, not since
Mr. Hilton has divorced from his wife, leaving not only his house but also his
17 years old son, Stephen. No economic issue, at least: to Margaret (Stephen's
mother) and his son remained that incredibly huge house in east LA and however
Margaret has always been an hard worker; co-founder of one of the biggest
advertising agency of the city, Ms.
Hilton, wanted barely accept the maintenance allowances by his
ex-husband. Certainly we cannot say that Margaret Hilton wasn't a good mother,
or that she wasn't able to take care of her son nevertheless, in the last
times, things with Stephen started to be tricky. Her work and the divorce has
pushed her into more issues than she expected. Her days were more and more busy
now. "I'm starting to miss him" she happened to think looking at his
only son, while holding his skateboard, Stephen left the house without say even
one word to her. "It is my fault?...what did I wrong with him, he really
hates me so much?"
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Stephen Hilton |
Stephen Hilton was a quite normal boy as many others, he had
blond straight hair long enough to seem the skater/punk rebellious type.
Although he has always been shorter and skinnier compared to other guys of his
age, and this has been a kind of problem for him, especially at school. We
could say that the blossoming of manliness has been a little in late, for him.
But in that moment Stephen hadn't the will and time to think about that, the
only Stephen's desire was to find enough money to go away, away from his
mother, away from that stupid house and from that boring life. Where? It wasn't
important , the point was to leave that rich and hypocritical life, search his
own way, meet new people, do what he want. For all of these kind of
"teenagers" issues, unfortunately, Stephen chose the wrong way.
Meeting new people from the "underground" LA, he started to be what
we could call a little "drug dealer. Sure it was only weed, and in very
low quantity and only for people he knew. But this situation led Stephen to a
weird serial of coincidences which will led him to future events that he would
never has thought.
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Everything has started that Friday.
"That's enough, Steph, get up off your bed NOW!"
these was the first words that Stephen, still with his eyes closed, has heard
that morning.
"Oh come on mom, let me sleep...what's going on?"
"And you've the brave to ask me, you..you, Me and your
father have given you all...all you have desired! And for what? to be always
tricked behind our back?"
"Shit...mom calm down, I've no idea about what are you
talking about!!"
That Rick...or Nick or whatever, that stupid friend of
yours, the police has catched him for possession and selling of drug!! Margaret
have had to stop for a brief moment, she was out of her mind. At the same time
Stephen's thoughts started to swirl in his mind: what, Rick, could have told
about him? Surely the police have interrogated him, but...
"Police says that you could be involved, they're
analyzing the evidences right now. Steph...look at me, is that true?"
With a trilling tone in his voice, Stephen replied
"Mom, I'm...it was only a little bit of weed, I
mean...nothing serious at all! It's just that...
"My God, Stephen..."
"Jesus, mom... don't look at me like this, I've told
you....only several smoking evenings with my friends. Do I look like a drug
dealer?
"I do not know what to say, Steph, we...we are a
family, you've never had money trouble! Holy God, why do you have done
something like this to me? - Margaret was close to the tears.
Even though all of his feelings about his mother and his
family, the young Stephen just couldn't see his mother in that state. He just
had not any single word to justify himself. He continued to stay silent,
looking at the carpet below his feet.
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"I just don't know what to do now, Kat! I've finished
the ideas...am I such a bad mother?" Margaret was talking with her sister
Kaitlin Fuller Smith. Kaitlin was a successful psychologist resident in the New
York area. Unlike many sisters, Margaret and Kaitlin have always been close. In
the last years the Margaret's calls have been more steady, creating a kind of
therapist-patient relationship where Marg could vent herself, and Kat could keep
in touch with her family.
"You're not, Marg, believe me teenagers are the worst
thing to being a parent, I've already passed on trouble like this...remember,
with my Chloe?"
"Ohh..but it was completely different, Chloe has always
been such a delicious girl!"
"Just don't let me talk about her first loves...or that
terrible last year at high school, and that damn prom dance!"
"You know, sometimes I think that I would prefer to
have those problems. But this...this is on another planet...Holy Jesus, drug dealing!!"
"Maybe I should talk to him"
"And the worst part is that I actually don't know how
to do with my work. There's this new advertising campaign that is going to
start next week, I'm the director, you know... But I'll have to quit, to keep
an eye on Stephen especially during this shitty situation about the
drugs..."
"Oh...and yes, as if that wasn't enough, if the police
investigations will go ahead, surely, the school is going to expel
Stephen"
"I have an idea! why don't you let Stephen come to me,
to stay for some time? The house is so big since Chloe went to college, I
mean..in my job I've already had to do with other difficult teen, maybe I can
help him."
"Yeah..maybe you could help him. But Kat, you
know...his friends and all of his things are here, and in addition he has to
finish the school..."
"Marg, listen to me, the friends that he has are the
same that probably are leaded him where he is now. And then, he's young, after
all, I'm sure he'll find new friends also here. And for the school, remains few
semesters, and don't have you talked about a prospective expulsion? We can
enroll him on a good school here, and a change of air can help him, I'm
sure"
"Well..should be only some months, and maybe stay far
from LA could be good, after all...You really would do so, Kat?"
"Sure! I would be happy to spend some time with my
nephew. Perhaps he could be little worried about my severe rules. But when
He'll return you'll barely recognize him!"
"Oh my god...you've saved my family, I think you're the
best sister indeed!"
"mhh, well, I'm definetely agree, darling! ahahah"
"ahahaha"
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End of chapter one
Love where this is going! One little piece of constructive criticism, however, the colour of Kaitlin's speech is a little difficult to read on your background. Perhaps consider something in a darker font?
ReplyDeleteYou're absolutely right, Crow, I've not checked enough the preview. I've just updated her speeches in something more purplish and darker, It seems better now, I guess.
DeleteThank you for your time and useful crit, hope you'll enjoy the next issues of the the story.
Kiss,
Steffy
Welcome back Steff:
ReplyDeleteIt was a pleasure to return home this weekend and to see new additions to your blog. The first chapter is very good. Not too many characters and they are well developed. Your usual talented fare. I look forward to more. Perhaps the male lead will run away and do something truly stupid when he finds out where he is going. I am sure you have another chapter in the can. Looking forward to wherever your furtile mind leads us.
Stay Safe Lee
Ohh thank you, my Lee, kind and sweet as always! I was afraid that this story, unlike "classical" tg caps, could be too boring for you, I mean...without the prevalent image factor typical of caption panels. Hope you enjoy also this new experiment!
DeleteKiss, Steffy
Hi again CandySteff
DeleteI realize that any story must unfold. Setting, characters and other details too complex for me. Thake your time and spin your tale however you wish. It seems a good start and I await your exploits. Is this what happened you ? I should think that when your additions pop in you are in Europe? I hope your team won.
Stay sweet n safe Lee
Yeah...I guess this story as well as future others may kinda reflect some of my own experiences, or at least apart of those. And yes, I live in Europe, but I'm actually planning to move to US, probably this year. See ya soon,
DeleteKiss, Steffy
I'm loving this story more than any of your other recent ones. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job... Keep up the wonderful work.
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